by pujalata980
You are taking quite a long time in updating the story. Please update it more frequently.
I notice that you are keeping the sexual content on the lower side and relying more on emotions of the characters
Madhu has given Sarla her address how about a foursome along with Pinky and Sunita.
The sexual quotient of your stories has been down and you are expressing more emotions now.
Bring back Madhu. She can express her wishes and Sarla would make the mother and daughter do the same. Sarla may earn some money or other benefits in return
This episode was great in matters of Sarla's mind games but there is a little lack of the broadly expressed sexual drama that used to be the highlight of pujalata980 stories. The idea was great and the tease of mom hiding from the daughter was beautifully written
Sarla has made the situation quite erotic. Mother daughter submission and that too in daughter's ignorance. Hot!
You can all contact me at latawrites980@gmail.com and I am sorry for irregular updates and long absence. I have had some health issues and was actually busy recovering from the same. Thanks to all
You can mail me your suggestions and complaints(if any). Thank you all for always reading and appreciating my work, however good or bad they might be.