by ajroye
An interesting story, but please stop using the word "yeep". Once is more than enough.
I don’t want Amy to end up with Terry. She really needs to do some growing up!
Loving the story and i. Hoping Terry and Track end up together in the end. Although Amy if a wild one, I agree she needs to grow up and her relationship with Ronnie seems a bit dangerous.
Drunks slur, sometimes recovering stroke victims slur, but not people with no speech impediments afaik, they may drawl or maybe say something in a lazy, tired fashion, but not slur. Your stories and feedback could well improve for that minor change. Or maybe it’s me.
That aside, good story, engaging characters and I’m hoping for good things for Traci & Terry, but I have a horrible feeling Amy’s lifestyle will come back and bite her in the ass.
Glad that Amy is history. I found her character to be too entitled, selfish, and manipulative. Her constant need for many different sex partners and situations are not going to be good for any tyoe if real, long term relationship with anyone. Glad you got him with Traci.