All Comments on 'Love Vanished Pt. 03 - Redemption'

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Anonymousover 4 years ago

I stopped reading when it became evident that she was going to duck James

Shortly after introducing his character.

If I want interracial bullshit, I’ll go to IR, not LW. And definitely not when she’s a single mom. Out this on IR, or Romance; or even non-erotic.

Anonymousover 4 years ago

Trouble with pronouns.

" He had shown and taught the children and I many things" is wrong. Between him and I is wrong. You would not say he taught I many things. Learn subject and object pronouns.

AMerryman 2.0

Anonymousover 4 years ago

An off color story.

What difference does it make what race anyone is? Glad she ended up content and secure. Too contrived and perfect landing for her and the children. Should have been in Fantasy.

Anonymousover 4 years ago

I'm not even sure what the !@#$ this was. The first chapter was ok, then it went into the shitter in the second and this was just a complete cluster!@#$.

Anonymousover 4 years ago

she should have not did what she did to him in the first place

Anonymousabout 1 month ago

Confusing. Henry just up and left at some point?

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