All Comments on 'Love versus The Spreadsheet'

by JuanSeiszFitzHall

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BobbyBrandtBobbyBrandtover 1 year ago

A fun read. Good luck with the contest

FlyingGuy1958FlyingGuy1958over 1 year ago

The spreadsheet showed Neal what he wanted. Felicity with some help from C, P and V showed him what he needed. Good luck with the contest

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The little black book goes high tech, man however goes unchanged arrogantly blundering in the dark. 5 golden ones and the best of chance in the comp.

panaflorapanafloraover 1 year ago

Clever and nicely nuanced between the actions of gods/demigods and mortals. There's also a lesson in here for selfish bastards.

SomaSlaveSomaSlaveabout 1 year ago

A nicely amusing story, leading to a good last line.

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'Juan Seisz FitzHall' is (big surprise) a pseudonym, under which I have published three erotic novels at smashwords.com: 'Mega Platinum VIP,' 'The Dance Game,' and 'Erotopia,' which together make up the trilogy 'The Erotichronicles.' That trilogy is finished. If the characters...