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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Like the concept very much--thank you for posting it.

I would have liked for there to have been at least some greater attempt to communicate beyond name and "fuck"...(and progress--after all, there are even things in a lab that can be identified, or simply the parts of the body easily pointed to).

And eventually, a resolution with a more positive ending. Did she get pregnant? Who had fucked her before? A merman, or one of the lab techs, and would she have resisted or embraced it as a "natural" sea creature who loved sex?

But those are other stories. Maybe you can write them?

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