All Comments on 'Lucky at Love'

I would sure love to get some comments from you! I'm a firm believer that there is a difference between erotica and porn (although there is, of course, some overlap). I'm fine with the fact that my work is not for everyone but I really hope you enjoy a sweeter, less nasty form of eritoca.

Let me know if you think I'm off base here.

Very well done. I suppose a crirtique like that is not very helpful in terms of improving your work, but frankly I find nothing of any import to criticize. I have now read 2 of your 3 stories. Both were very well done. I'll read the last one and maybe you'll fumble the ball, but somehow I doubt it. Excellent work !

Again, well written, but like Simone, it's another role-play session in the dining room. We still don't know much about our characters.