All Comments on 'Lucky Strike Pt. 01'

Fantastic. Hopefully much more to come

Great start to a great series. Please keep it going.

Great story needs more chapters

Excellent story. All the good and bad parts flow beautifully although I prefer to avoid incest since it isn’t my thing but it’s your story. I really look forward to reading more which hopefully includes some fun revenge on his dear old ex-wife. 5⭐️ and then some!

What happened to the lesbian sex slaves who were supposed to move in with him? They seem to have disappeared once his daughters moved in?

It would be great if his lovely ex-cunt was turned into a common street whore, giving him %80 until she paid all the $$ back.

Loved the story till you were being cruel while having sex with that girl .

that will lose you a star or two .

Great loved it!!

I love the way you write. I felt like I was there witnessing everything. I would love to see more Dominance in the future. My girlfriend loves when I spank her and choke her. Keep it coming!

Finally an MC that is fucking pure alpha going nuts with his gift and taking no prisoners. A refreshing change from the whiny moralistic shit that most stories are full of. Hey variety is the spice of life!

Now he just needs to claim his daughters, get over that silly incest hangup, make his wife pay, and live the good life. Easy! Especially when you can basically make anyone do what you want with a thought!

A whole lot of Sadism!

This story should come with a warning in the intro. It's not for everyone.

Maybe a different category?