All Comments on 'Lucky's Lucky Night Ch. 02'

that was hot. great series.

And don't make us wait too long.

This chapter was over way too soon - I never wanted it to end. FABULOUS story, loving every word of it. And thank you for sharing it here - and for being a great writer. Your style is unique, and the fact that you are grammatically correct (so rare on this site) is wonderful. Looking forward to another hot chapter!

I'm a dedicated fan of black female/white male stories, so I don't know how Part One slipped past me. But I'll definitely be watching out for Part Three. A great debut on Literotica and a great series developing. Sexy, romantic, great characters, and excellent storytelling (alternate point-of-view is difficult, but you seem to handle it with ease). More please!

Loved it...

If I could give you a ten, I would. This was a fantastic story. Please, please do not keep us waiting for the rest of the story !!!

You're a great writer! I absolutely love this story. Now I'm on to read the rest.

I found this with the random story mix. I got so lucky! *lol* Bad pun. I love it so much. My head is so full of your story's vision. I'm so glad to see such a true to life story. The feeling and emotions (esp of Lucky - I fear the same in my relationships) are so deep and I love the sex - even if I usually prefer more details at the end. Wonderful!

This was a really good, realistic, sexy, relatable account of two people making love...i hope you have more in store for us soon!

Awesome story!! I came across this by mistake, but it was a pleasant one.

I find myself wrapped up in this story. It is so beautifully written and that can't often be said of erotic literature. It really is wonderful to read. The descriptions and your characters are so real and warm. I cannot wait to read more. Thank you!

Thank you! Nice job on this scene.