All Comments on 'Lucy's Pursuits'

Lucy is with a John. That situation usually involves a payment of some kind. Who will make the payment? I found this quite arousing. Why else would I read stories here? Five Stars.

Well written, though Big Jo became Bob for an instant but otherwise not too much wrong... Other than the category. Its up to the author where to post his story but I believe fetish might have been a better place, it would certainly have been better received and more fairly scored, although I haven't seen any comments or scores yet I'm pretty sure of what a lot of them will be.

As for myself I'm quite happy to read most subjects and I think this, for a story featuring a cuck and submissive husband pretty much hits the nail on the head. My only complaint is that we learn too little about Lucy: she is, in my opinion the main personality of the story yet we know little of her character, other than she likes being in control and has a bit of a sadistic streak, even so she sounds a very sexy, hot woman. Perhaps another part told from her POV might square things, if nothing else it'd give the self proclaimed "real men" something to rant about.

The British are just.... so.... bloody.... polite.

Please add a cuckold warning at the beginning.

You have a wonderful writing style, but the reader can become distracted by the errors. Jo becoming Bob, as graymangazer pointed out, as well as "I didn't want to loose" where you meant lose. A your when it should have been a you're, in addition to many missing commas. I look forward to reading your other work, but please find an editor. Thank you!

Are you sure her pursuits are UNquestionable?

I think they are unquestionably quite questionable

Well written alho not my favorite theme.

What I don't get is how the prior two commentors both asked you to splain it up front. Your sub title should have made it abundantly clear what was up. but you can't account for dimwits I guess. Despite those two idiots, you have so far gotten an amazing 16 favorited readers.

Wow. Such a wonderful wife and a good husband.

Good scenario but spoiled by too many errors. Try proof reading it before posting