All Comments on 'Luna's Turn'

just added you to favorite author even though you have only 3 truely great stories. So let me encourage you to keep on writing stories like these three. I will keep looking to see more

Hot and fast! Just what the doctor ordered.

I’m loving this series. The temperature keeps going up and the view into Luna’s thoughts is compelling. I’m looking forward to how Luna’s curiosity will get satisfied.

Can’t wait for more

Hi Grace and Honey, loved the story of Luna and Amelia looking forward to more chapters thank you. Xx

Magnificently written .

Had me hiding my erection at work

I must admit that for a beginner you are quite good at writing. You have great potential. However, I do find the story unfolds too swiftly and character development is skeletal. This would need refinement. I read your stories (3) one after the other. Maybe you should have only one story divided into three chapters and so on ... you mentioned it would be continued. All in all, I voted 4 stars for your great effort and looking forward to enjoying more from your imagination. I did add you to my list of authors. Wink