by silverace1
I will give you 100 i wish some of these other stories were like yours it`s great please bring us more its really tasty to.
I really don't like 2nd person narratives, I prefer 1st person in stories like this maybe even 3rd person but 2nd person makes me feel violated for some strange reason.
Nice little story, obviously enjoyed by more people than just me. 5*
detroitdave
Im shocked that even 15 years ago we got a decent story, thats decently written.