by jack9warrick
WHY do you have to use 'her' name every time you refer to 'her'?
It gets very tedious!!
From the first two sentences of the first paragraph - "All week I had been thinking about lunch on Thursday with Leslie. Leslie and I have been working together for years. "
Why not "All week I had been thinking about lunch on Thursday with Leslie. We've been working together for years." - to the first two sentences of the last but one paragraph - "I got off of Leslie and sat on the edge of the bed. I had Leslie stand with her back to me."
Why not "I got off of her and sat on the edge of the bed. I had her stand with her back to me."?
Use some imagination to avoid the frequent repetition!