All Comments on 'Lusty Legal Partners (LLP) Ch. 04'

by Pimanko

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elling50elling503 months ago

I gave it 3*. Too little development on what is special with this club.

WoodencavWoodencav3 months ago

This is developing into an awesome storey, I love it! So looking forward to further chapters! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

PimankoPimanko3 months agoAuthor

I am developing this story one step at a time. What is special about this club will be revealed in two parts in chapters 5 and 6. Chapter 5 should appear in about two weeks and Chapter 6 should appear two weeks after that. I anticipate the story to be at least 8 chapters long but no more than 10.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Very poor writing with many spelling mistakes and sentences that don't make sense. Please do spell check and proof read in the future.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Boring and bad writing. Just not engaging reading.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Ever wonder why after 56 stories you have 224 followers, while others who have written far fewer have a thousand or more? It's time for you to find a new hobby.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Wow, who’d have thunk! All you need for a boost to your relationship is to fuck everyone else but your partner. Such a simple solution, wonder why they invented marriage?

Dennis26Dennis263 months ago

Enjoying this , waiting on the next part.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Who is Janice???? Thought that the wife of Norbert was Kristen!!!! Proofreading would have prevented that error. Try harder.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

2* because Jim didn't get any

dirtyharry6971dirtyharry69713 months ago

Great read, but not enough details of how and what the wife is feeling about the sex itself. You need to be more descriptive about her emotions and enjoyment of different cocks.

26thNC26thNC2 months ago

Lawyers with silly animal names screwing each other instead of clients.

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I have published one book, ghost-written a second, contributed to an anthology, and a number of profession-related articles. All were non-fiction. It is fun to write erotic stories. My hope is that readers enjoy reading my stories as much as I enjoy writing them.