All Comments on 'Lynn's Glory Pt. 01: Beachside'

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bamagal2bamagal211 months ago

Very arousing... great buildup and then hot, Hot, HOT! Thank you for sharing this!

bamagal2bamagal211 months ago

Very arousing... great buildup and then hot, Hot, HOT! Thank you for sharing this! More, please!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Nice little vignette, but lacks environment. Well done for not shying away from ‘gaily’, but spell it right please. You wear swimming trunks, plural. It doesn’t even exist as singular in this sense.

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