All Comments on '[M/F] Focus'

I preferred your story about Alex and Pierce. This is partly personal as I am not into domination but here the domination, while more prominent than in the other story, never really takes control. Conversely, there is not a playfulness about it either--where In your other story, there is a playful tease between the Alex and Pierce about control but it doesn't approach domination. The result is that this story seems less worked out or polilshed. The premise here, however, is a good one.

(me, insane about femdom) another 10/10 you don’t miss. though i was having trouble figuring out wtf the positions were a few times & wondering what miraculous dream chair can hold up a fucking like this. still great though!!

Not bad, but him calling her "Mistress" is such a cringe, at least for me personally.

It's such an overused and totally unnecessary cliche.