by devonmiles
Well, as a self confessed dyslexic, I think that for Devon to have produced a First Attempt of this quality is little short of amazing.
And, as the protagonist here (yes, we've been in contact 🙂), I find it flattering that anyone would go to the trouble of writing a story to describe their fantasies in such detail. I feel there is so much more that Devon can achieve here, and this is without doubt worthy of five stars from me.
Hope you agree.
Macey.