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All Comments on 'Mack 11. Truth or Dare Consequences'

by GabrielInkabus

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

You’ve got a thing for 3’s. Every chapter has ended much too quickly at only three pages. Now we have to wait for chapter 12….

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikey7 months ago

Another great, hot and sexy chapter! I loved reading that he realized it’s been his daughter. Thank you for writing and please continue.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

What?? This story is so convoluted that it's become incoherent and no longer believable, even as a work of fantasy/fiction. The promise of potential sexual relationship between Jennifer and Daddy kept me reading each new chapter, but no more. 2 stars.

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Aspiring writer, creator, professional liar. A note for those who read my works. My text editor is as good as I can afford. I write as a hobby. I have a number of books in the works and I hope to become a professional writer with any luck. I thank you all for your comments. La...