All Comments on 'Mage and Consort Pt. 03'

Oooh, delicious tension. I look forward to how the high mages respond to Melina's attempted flight.

Nicely developed series. The reader is as puzzled as Anya, gradually learning about this world and trying to figure out everyone's true motives. An exciting journey.

This story is building very well. 5/5 Keep it coming!

The more that gets revealed, the less becomes understood. Still an excellent read.

Poor Melina, Leo, and Anya, twisting in the wind for six months and abandoned by their author, an author more talented than any of the palace mages but also more callous.

Fantastic, def looking for the next installment. Thanks for this great tale.

Very enjoyable:⁠-⁠)

Really like where your tale appears to be heading too. Lots of delicious possibilities.