All Comments on 'Maggie's Month Ch. 03'

after reading the first 3ch i feel like i am missing part of the story. i would like to know more about these eggs and what brought her her to this job.

The eggs are McGuffins; an unexplained plot device that is suppose to be desirable. Please fix by giving the eggs a back story or something.

The Gryphon's on FIRE

I agree with the above comments as to the story weaknesses. It can be fixed and in fact it begs for an epilog/sequal/ chapter 4. The science in the science fiction does need refining. Good read, look forward to the next chapter or story.

The BEST chapter of all! PLEASE! PLEASE give me MORE of this! OMG! I absolutely LOVE how peaceful and calm Maggie is about the whole ordeal and how WELL she's treated there... Normally, with this kind of situation there is just nothing but constant torture portrayed and, honestly, it gets dull after a while with story after story about breeders being tortured. I really like this change of pace where you have a breeder actually being treated nicely and thus being able to be at peace while bringing forth egg after egg. YES! You should DEFINITELY continue this on! :)