All Comments on 'Maggie's Training'

"this was the best way for her to regain control of her life, to be again fit and happy" and DIVORCED!

Pain, pleasure, training and divorce, all wrapped up in bs

Yes, Maggie was looking for something different, but No, she would not comply so readily with the demands of John. Ridiculous premise for a scene

I'm giving you Five stars, because the concept and outline of the story has some promise. The execution is horrible. If English is not your first language, that's one thing. Otherwise, you really REALLY need to find an editor and proofreader. Your grammar is execrable.

In the beginning the trainer's name is John Presley and then it's John Delaney ... and Elenore (or is it Eleonore) refers to him as Tom. Either get an editor or proof read your stories before submitting.

White trash whore stoops to big black clown.