All Comments on 'Magic is a Powerful Thing Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This is really starting to get interesting. I enjoyed it from the start but I wondered who would come for the book since those things are never truly lost but are linked to someone.

ahotbodahotbodalmost 3 years ago

Sorry but how come Mom never noticed the body then gender change of her son/daughter?

Scots_RavenScots_Ravenalmost 3 years agoAuthor

chapter 1 the spell cast by jacob effected the whole town including her mom who didnt have the jewelry on so couldnt resist it or even notice it.

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