All Comments on 'Mail Order Bride Pt. 02'

She is leaving her husband for this other guy and that he is so wealthy and cnnected that the head chef would drop everything to serve him and it would be comped and he is also willing to commit murder for a woman who is ready to leave her husband without knowing anything about each other.

No really, if he is so perfect, why hasn't he been married before?

I'm intrigued by the big idea of the story but agree with previous comment the story is overstepping how fast the two main characters are melding together. I wish the author kept some conflict or dramatic tension . The narrator is too omnipotent (so far ) to really identify with. He's accrued massive trappings of wealth and now has true love ?

Props go to peterswifft for the skillfully chronicled ectasy passages , but the hook would set so much deeper, if an obstacle manifested that threatens to sever the fresh connection. I'm rooting for author , his characters and hoping for challenges worthy of their mettle.

53/23 Yadi dada do. Give us a break. Now one meeting and he will kill for her and then he wants to share her. Pathetic

think about it, mail order bride = golddigger looking for a sugar daddy no love involved. you bet she's going to dump the other guy who is in hock up to his eyebrows and wants to be with the rich guy. the old guy, of course, is thinking with the wrong head.just wanting the gold digging whore