by MrBigRiverSky
The tone change was too abrupt to make it a hot story for me. If you had continued into the long term plans, it might have made it work out, but for a story this short it's really not effective.
omg so good... instant cum last night with this. Now I'm getting hard again just reading it.
I agree about the tone change insofar as it could build longer, but this was amazing nevertheless. Short lead-in, no irrelevant descriptions to distract the reader. Just the seduction and triumph(breeding). This is exemplary. *chef kiss*
Well, he has a week with her. There are so many options open for this story to take. Hopefully we will get a day by day detailed description of what happens to her before her daughter comes home. Maybe her daughter comes home just as the guy leaves the house after dropping another load of cum in her.
How can you be fucking her from behind and also having your balls slap her clit?
This is what I want my wife to experience. To be bred by another man with a big dick.
Thank You for the story, it made me hot and wet. It's true as well if i cum maybe from fingering or from a reading a sexy story like yours I'm primed for more orgasms right away. I wouldn't want to offer sex on the first date just like her but in that post orgasmic glow with my mind partially melted and thinking of more orgasms my judgement would be gone and even if it wasn't a rape... I'd likely still be screwed
I came back to this story tonight. There’s nothing I like more than kisses leading to me being fingered, coming, and then getting desperate for dick. I always delay a little but after I get some neck kisses I melt into a submissive orgasm machine