All Comments on 'Making It Real'

Is this the first part ?

Please mark it or else it's an incomplete story

Very well written fantasy

Too much talk not enuf doing. This marriage us dead and she is off to Only Fans to make big $$

Call the attorney. It's over.

Great start. Please keep going and let things progress for fun for everyone.

Needs a cuck tag to differentiate it from a double swap.

I did not rate it as I skimmed and figured out what the story was.

What the effffff man

Just a question. Do you really use a person's name that many times in a conversation? I know that I'd someone uses my name more than once in a conversation I immediately put that person in the same category as salespeople and lawyers. They are automatically assumed to be parasitic scum and I would walk away. I don't trust someone trying to sell me something

Boring as watching paint dry. I was skimming 2/3 of the way thru the first page. Almost 15k words on fantasies? No vote, I didn't care for it.

Too many words of a stilted conversation. People do not speak like this. Too slow development. 2*

Nice to have so open communication within the couple ;)

There were things I liked and things I didn't like, but good effort

Please do not turn her into an evil humiliating cunt when this story goes forward. That is not necessary in a good cuckold relationship

Nothing like that old big black clown to revive a marriage.