All Comments on 'Making Our Kind of Fireworks'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great orgy scene!

I loved how it flowed naturally and sans inhibitions - good erotic fun among friends.

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

TheWandTheWandalmost 5 years ago
So Fucking Hot

That Ed got Claire's engine going before the party!

You can tell they're super hot for each other. Suzy is a sexpot for sure.

Would like to read a follow-up of a threesome between her, Ed and Claire.

Your story turned me on, thanks!

FOUNTAINPEN67FOUNTAINPEN67almost 5 years ago
Five... wonderfully hot!

I like how you leave your inhibitions hanging on the hook next to your coat when you write... and your panties on the floor I am guessing! Love this! More PLEASE!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Yeah...um...ok

"God, yes! Please fuck my ass!"

Said no woman ever....🤔

Brittni4uBrittni4ualmost 5 years ago
Hot....as always

Hot story! 5 stars from this girl.....loved it!

goducks111goducks111almost 5 years ago
fun sexy read

a little short, but a lot of great sex. 5 stars

daylilygardenerdaylilygardeneralmost 5 years ago
Let The Sparks Fly

Super hot story...and yes some gals like anal...5 Stars.

AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopalmost 5 years ago
Love it Five stars

I love impromptu parties. The more the merrier, especially fun when everyone gets on the same page quickly and positively. Good right writing style. Great storyline xoxoxoxo Annette ♠️♠️♠️💋💋

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Nice idea

But strangely un-erotic.

JSipesJSipesalmost 5 years ago
Love Thy Neighbor

My kind of neighborhood party. I lived in a neighborhood like that one time. My wife loved it. She was the neighborhood ambassador. I did my best to follow her example.

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