by P_Anderer
It's really hard to tell a good short and erotic story, this one is very hot!
Thanks for sharing, Jackie.
The continued attempt to convince men that woman on woman affairs are normal and that all men are into that.
The only winners are the manfloras who increase their chances of hooking up with women under the guise of fluidity.
In my humble experience with men... some men like to be humbled like that, it's a huge turn on for them. If that's not you, all well and good, but I maintain that this is a well written and sexy story, and sometimes stuff just happens.
Just my point of view, you're more than welcome to your own, Jackie.
Shame the anonymous critic does not have the balls to even post under his/her username. Probably some emasculated male who can't get it up. Heyho.
This was a good, hot, short story. Let's not get too embroiled in the mechanics. Obviously too many trolls on here! 5* from me!
5 stars from me. Would love to read about what happen at the sleepover. Pappasleaze!
5 stars from me. Now I am wanting/needing to hear what all happen at that sleepover. I hope you will have the time and share that with us. Pappasleaze!
The moment she allowed someone other than her husband to enjoy her body, it’s cheating regardless how you reframe it.
What is it with people adding non lesbian stories to this site. The moment a penis comes up the lesbian theme is gone. This should be in Loving Wives. As far as the story it's not that good. The description of the sex was choppy at best.
I liked the whole idea but i feel it was rushed and became quickly unreal. I don't agree with anonymous claiming that since there is a 'dick' you should change it to loving wives, the basic hero of the story had just lesbian sex so it is in correct category. However, i agree with the opinion that the sex scenes were rushed and clumsy... Consider revisting the theme with a bit slower seduction/narration.