by flashgordon562006
You were right. The way you left it will be disliked.
You were wrong. This was not sufficient to be considered an "attempt at this type of story".
I couldn't make it past the first section. The murder and betrayal killed the sex in it. Too many tired tropes, and leaving the ending up to the readers says (to me) it was poorly conceived and ought to go back n the box until you can re-think it.