All Comments on 'Marge, Dan & Sandy'

by flashgordon562006

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hindsight2020hindsight2020over 2 years ago

You were right. The way you left it will be disliked.

You were wrong. This was not sufficient to be considered an "attempt at this type of story".

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Number 5

ndeavourndeavourover 2 years ago

I couldn't make it past the first section. The murder and betrayal killed the sex in it. Too many tired tropes, and leaving the ending up to the readers says (to me) it was poorly conceived and ought to go back n the box until you can re-think it.

Mandalore71Mandalore71over 2 years ago

Good story? My vote is for option 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Readers hire a hitman to do away with the author.

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