by Sustainer
Unbelievable! I would never expected chapter two to be this much worse than your awful first chapter. How long can you sustain this level of mediocrity?
Big Black Cock should be banned as a fetish expression, it is clearly stereotyping and racist. Mainly used by white fantasists.
Unbelievable! I would never expected chapter two to be this much better than your amazing first chapter. How long can you sustain this level of perfection?
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And Jeff left, spoke with his attorney and never saw the evil woman he married again.
When she bled to death, right? Too big into too small equals too bad.
In from Ohio's largest Amish country...Ohio has two major Amish settlements..mine is much larger and more prominent than the other one... I was born and raised here..Since I have nothing good to say about this stupid slut bitch whore..I just won't say anything...
I don’t care either way about what Maria and Jeff (who seemed to change into Dave) get up to, they’re both consenting adults. So if they’re happy with what they’re doing it’s no big deal. I’m not a religious person at all but it does bother me when others deliberately provoke or mock someone’s religious beliefs. It’s small minded, petty and completely unnecessary, the impression I got from this chapter was that aside from Maria being a masochist (because having your cervix battered by any object is painful) ...was that non conventional sex at a location where the locals are famed for being reserved was intended to be a FU to said locals. That just goes way beyond insensitive to banal and crass.
Tess (UK)
Keep it up, author. The sign that little insecure incels are mad at your story means your story is definitely good. Keep making these pathetic virgins with no life mad at a fictional character lol.
Yuck. And tying this disgusting story to a quiet, good-hearted religious minority is despicable. Double Yuck.