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Hi everyone, author here. This is actually the very first story I've ever written, as I recently decided to give this a try. Whether you liked or hated it, I just wanted to let everyone know I'll be monitoring the comments closely to inform the sorts of things to include or avoid in my next story (go ahead and give me a follow if you want to be automatically notified when the next one comes out). Thank you for giving my story a chance!

Sincerely,

Selurn

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