by westjayne495
Fantastic chapter, Jayne. Everything was super hot; the instructions in the pub to show yourself, the fucking in the car park (is dogging on the cards? I hope not, as it always seems so impersonal), the mutual masturbation was incredibly sexy and, for me, the high point of the chapter as you described the actions and feelings between you both is such exquisite detail, and got so so turned on!!
The finale of you considering going with another woman was a beautiful ending. As Kevin says, it’s every man’s ultimate fantasy to see his SO with another girl - I hope this become part of the next chapter and we hear about you and one of your golfing or gym buddies, as Kev watches on, or just gets aroused hearing you tell him the sexy details after the event!!
Loved the dialogue — a hallmark of your creative writing, and these escapades are getting better and better (meaning more outrageously erotic and adventurous). Looking forward.
Loved it, and i agree with the purvis content that your escapades are becoming hotter with every chapter. The scene in the pub was so good and the mutual masturbation was beautiful and erotic. Great work and looking forward to more, hotter action in future chapters.