All Comments on 'Mark and Ellie Pt. 02'

A little short on the development. The first chapter could have been a bit more on Mark's inability to help Ellie even though it seems that he as started to look at cuckold stories. He could commiserate about not being there for Ellie. Chapter 2 started ok but devolved into just Mark watching a video that I suppose was made that afternoon? We should have more of what happened before the video and until he got home. Hopefully we will have a bit more on how Mark feels now that he is going to have to sleep in the guestroom.

I love the idea of forced masturbation, , please more :)

Awesome story. Looking forward for the continuation.

Part 3?

Wanna but the author is a pathetic loser? Wanna bet he has never had a real relationship? I would bet every dollar I ever earner. I would bet he has been molested before and liked it.

Part 3 plzz