All Comments on 'Marketing My Wife'

by TWeston

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Looking forward to Part 2!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

WAY too much backstory. Actually, it is all backstory...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great story so far. Background is perfect, and the sex is subtle but very present. Love the balance between the hot wife and the husband. Just don’t let it drift inexorably to a boring cuckold tale - this has more promise than that. Thanks.

lazy_readerlazy_readerover 1 year ago

Enjoyable introduction. Lots of teasing and stories of past activity, but you've left us hanging. PLEASE give us a continuation of this story.

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Writer and editor of more than a hundred articles, short stories, and books. I love writing, and I write for me. I love to create fictional stories, putting people into circumstances I wish were mine. And I love to edit stories for other writers.