All Comments on 'Mark's Genie Ch. 04'

I like that he seems to be evolving and becoming a kinder person. I do hope he apologizes to the genie/alien for hurting her and acting a monster. I really like the Audrey character and I hope she isn't just thrown aside, also I do feel bad Alison saw him like that. Keep up the character growth its nice to see.

Oooh. You're really putting him through the paces, aren't you. Aversion therapy for arseholes, `training' him sexually, training him emotionally...

I presume that Allison won't get hurt (emotionally), as that would spoil what had just happened, and I presume Mark will end up with lots more consensual sex, starting with A&A.

(And that we will get the backstory, etc etc etc).

Looking forward to the sequels!

Idk what to even say to this. Too many Canadians, too lil time. Hhh or Indians. Just now im reading for the story, didn't even find it to be too eritotic. Maybe like soft porn or echi shit!

I love your twist on the genre - and that last line was fantastic.