by skinnysailor
I liked the story and gave it a 4, but it could have been a 5 with some depth and development. Good concept, and widely accepted by a lot of readers. There seemed to be so much missing from the story. Who, what where and when, and why, would help. a one-line sentence from the wife on a pad, is not character development. Is that his or her real Aunt? Good story but could have been great. Thanks for the effort.