All Comments on 'Marriage Counceling'

by skinnysailor

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

No warning, and wrong category.

Tootight1Tootight14 months ago

I liked the story and gave it a 4, but it could have been a 5 with some depth and development. Good concept, and widely accepted by a lot of readers. There seemed to be so much missing from the story. Who, what where and when, and why, would help. a one-line sentence from the wife on a pad, is not character development. Is that his or her real Aunt? Good story but could have been great. Thanks for the effort.

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