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Click hereI had expected another easy smile between them after the quip about him being a broken stallion, but neither of them reacted to it at all. She continued with total seriousness.
"To train someone like George...someone like you...who is not even Algorian to take the collar would be an unmatched feat. Even for someone like my tenacious daughter, whose own scores in dominance training were some of the best of her generation..."
She paused to allow me to be impressed. It was obvious she was very proud of Viktoria.
"...this is unlikely to succeed. But this is what my daughter wants," she threw her hands up here in mock desperation, "the only thing she's ever wanted really..." she added with resignation in her voice, "so of course, we will do whatever we can to be supportive."
The room once again fell silent.
"Well, I'm sure you two have a lot to talk about. Let's all retire for the evening. It was lovely to finally meet you in person, Lee," Astrid concluded as she stood and led George from the room.
I thought about trying to manage a "nice to meet you too," but I felt that any opening my mouth would most likely result in me screaming, so I settled for a slight nod of acknowledgement as they left the room.
I looked over the Viktoria now. She stood, still not releasing my hand, and said, "Come. We'll talk in my room."
She led me up the stairs and closed her bedroom door behind us. Finally, she let go of my hand. My hand felt weird to be free after being held so tightly for so long.
"Before you start, know that I love you more than I will ever love anything else," and she pressed her lips hard against mine. My emotions boiled over now, hot tears forming in my eyes and trailing down my cheeks. When she pulled back, I saw that she was also crying.
She pulled her chair out from her bedside desk, turned it around to face me, and sat down. "Ok, go," she said.
I stood in front of the woman I loved, the woman of my dreams, the woman who I now knew was batshit crazy. I took a deep breath to center myself and opened my mouth to speak.
- COMMENTS
Astolphoabout 1 month agoThis is good stuff, and I love his fairly realistic reaction to the big reveal.
However I wish their early relationship - including first playing with chastity etc. - had gotten a bit more focus. Honestly that's a pretty good first chapter there. On the other hand I can understand if you really want your story to take place on the island, and it's what makes this a unique premise rather than another "my university girlfriend introduced me to chastity" type of story. But I think seeing more of Lee's emotional reaction to some of this stuff could have gotten more focus, as it would better contextualise the later stuff.
memoryleak3 months agoSo wait, is George from Algoria and just has the same traits as Lee, thus why the mother didn’t think her daughter could accomplish this feat?
Anonymous3 months agoOh this is a great story line. But these island people are a fucking crazy sex Cult, and if he doesn't get up and run, then he is Ether stupid, or crazy too. What I read it more, or less said that he Qualified be a Dominant too, so why should he except a collar, he should Offer her the collar, to see if she loves him enough to Accept it. He needs to just run because he sure ain't going to be getting much pussy from this bitch, but he will be getting a whole of ass pegging, and spankings from her. Run and don't look back, she didn't even give him heads up, on what she was going to Expect Him to accept, fuck her..
