All Comments on 'Mary's Control Ch. 03 - Police Action'

liked this a lot but of course I have liked everything you done here. I will say that the sex scene seemed so much like the one with Cleo but was still good. I know you have it where all pets will service guest at a party on seventh chapter (yes I do read Bios) Nut I hope Connie and mom and daughter get together before then for a good ole foursome. I also hope some things are done else where other than just at home. whatever you have in your fantasy I am sure we will all enjoy. thank you for sharing.

Pappasleaze!

I am thoroughly enjoying this extremely hot though slightly implausible tale. This is erotic fiction at its best and the addition of a mother/daughter vibe adds an extra piquancy to the tale. Four more installments to come, I can hardly wait.

This is such a fun and entertaining and sexual adventure. Great story telling and great characters make it a 5 Star tale. Just such fun smut. Keeping the fun rocking and keep pushing the submissive ladies down the path of total Debauchery. Great times and the Thanks for you time to publish. Cheers

You wrIte a very good story my dear ..AL

wonderful