All Comments on 'Mary's Control Ch. 05 - Sylvia'

A wonderful chapter to an enthralling story. Excellent work.

What a wonderful storyline. cannot wait for the next chapter. Well done, excellent concise descriptions - keep up the storyline !!

excellent! it was written so well I felt as though I was there watching it all take place. Hope everything goes well with Sylvia's mom and herself. I am still waiting as patiently as possible for chapter 7 the party. another 5 stars from me.

Pappasleaze!

Wow! The story line has just headed in a totally new direction. I loved this installment as it appealed to the incurable romantic in me. I have no idea what is to come next and what Sylvia's ongoing role will be but I'm sure looking forward to finding out. Five well earned stars from me.