All Comments on 'Mary's Movie Night'

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CatHouseGuy20CatHouseGuy204 months ago

Nice first story. Like the descriptions of hubby trying to convince himself to pull out and not finish inside while Bella played the dirty girl.....little doubt who would win out. Obviously the others had planned this out and now hubby has a world of worry. Guessing now hubby has to continue to perform at movie night as the picture taken becomes blackmail. A part 2 would be appropriate so we can follow the probable roads of doom for our protagonist.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Please continue this! I'm so invested already!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

It would have made sense to have our protagonist go into Mary's bedroom and insist that she delete that photo. That would have added another level of realism to the story. Cudos to the author for giving us a scenario that is believable.

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