All Comments on 'Mary's Unexpected Escapade Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A bit juvenile, probably because of the age group of the unlikely characters involved. No plot as such. Soon became tedious.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

No real story or plot. Gave up before finishing.

auhound49auhound49over 1 year ago
MOST EXCELLENT!!!!!!

kEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! MORE PLEASE!

The best part of this story is "I want it... The cum, inside me... Knock me up!". this is when she becomes a real slut - no idea who the baby daddy is! So totally slutty!

Next, I hope she has black seed in her so not only will she not know the baby daddy but will also not know the color until birthing.

Being just a piece of meat for male pleasure, especially breeding meat, is such a high calling for any decent woman!

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