All Comments on 'Mass Effect: Purgatory Ch. 02'

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This was hot as hell! Hit all my buttons. Can't wait to read more!

i saw the first purgatory a while ago and it was by far one of the best stories i have read and then this one just as good its great!

the story and concept are great, but the editing and formatting are sloppy and distracts from the content. I recommend reading some of the top rated stories to get a general idea of how to do dialogue and also to give you where and when to break paragraphs.