All Comments on 'Massage Apprentice Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Superb continuation of the story line

Glad you have taken your time with this latest chapter ,it makes good reading 😄

newbynicknewbynickover 9 years ago
So far

I've enjoyed the chapters so far, and I'm really looking forward to the next instalment.

Well done.

Nick

swingerjoeswingerjoeover 9 years ago
Another excellent chapter

I have enjoyed the slow escalation in this series. Very well done. I look forward to the next chapter, and hope that it's published soon.

arrowglassarrowglassover 9 years ago
Talk about a build up!

A really slow burn that just keeps getting hotter and hotter! Love the way you have written this...a true description of sublime anticipation!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

loving the series. it's just getting hotter and hotter. Can't wait for the massage to start

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Cant wait

Great work! When is the next chapter going to be posted please?

AnnatartywifeAnnatartywifeover 9 years ago
well done ....again LOL

Amazingly tantalising writing and steamy as hell!! x x x

NthusiasticallyNthusiasticallyover 9 years ago
Such a Thrill . . .

To discover such a well-crafted series and yet such sweet torture to have to wait for the next installment. I admire your delicate balance of humor and sensuality. You're one of the few authors I've found on this site who understands that by building anticipation and deferring instant gratification, one achieves a much more satisfying climax, literary or otherwise. I'm eagerly awaiting further adventures of Jen and our hero. Soon, I hope!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
great story. have been anxiously waiting for part four!

Please post part FOUR!

And FIVE,

SIX

and SEVEN and however many other CHAPTERS to this wonderful tale!

PLEASE DON'T MAKE US WAIT MUCH LONGER!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great series

Please do continue this series, it's among the best in Literotica!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
What next?

I'm really looking forward to the next instalment on this story.

AnnatartywifeAnnatartywifealmost 9 years ago
More more

we want more, we want more!!! LOL x x x

vikster99vikster99over 8 years ago
Great series!

Awesome series, I would definitely like to read more!

NekidinazNekidinazabout 5 years ago
Wonderfully erotic...:)

A wonderfully written series of increasing sexual tension (both in the story and in me)...I love that this is not another "all in" and it's over, that you take your time building tension and sensual energy into the story...wonderfully written!

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