All Comments on 'Massage Therapy Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Thanks for the chapter.

A Full Submission of Ashlyn

Continue on

Cheers!

vikster89vikster899 months ago

love this! she should wear their old wedding dress and fuck his brains out on his side of the bed. and get her best friend to start going to the parlour

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Another FIVE-STAR story in an uninterrupted string of five-star stories!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Amaxing

lectorcuriosolectorcurioso9 months ago

The story becomes very boring, predictable and repetitive.

I hope you do something to rescue her and she doesn't continue sinking

3 stars, you should seriously consider finishing the story in the next chapter, so as not to drag it out in vain and ruin it.

See the example committed by the authors of Toxic Attraction and Neighbor Chronicles, who, to lengthen the story, became a ball of incoherence and absurd situations that take away any possibility of generating excitement, unless you are a teenager with many hormones and few neurons. .

Don't do the same.

And take the example of the author of Cassandra's Adventures, who when he saw that the story had run out, gave it an incredible and very good ending, although unexpected for many of us.

Thanks for sharing your work on Lit and not just on your other platforms.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Amazingly hot story! It's obvious now that the lovers are bonding emotionally. Ashley has a fullblown crush on Goro. How will their affair end up?

I would very much like to see Goro end up on top, showing the arrogant limpdick husband how a real man treats his woman. Yeah....

Joko44Joko449 months agoAuthor

Chapter 4 is now out on my Patreon!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

when will goro meet layla? hehe

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

will layla steal goro from ashlyn or will they share him? a threesome maybe?

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

will you post chapter 4 soon?

SnoopygirlSnoopygirlabout 1 month ago

Where’s my old Pervy man to fuck and finger my juicy pussy?? Hehee thx for sharing very nice xx

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Just an aspiring writer trying to make some good smutty stories. Thanks for reading guys! Shout out to Antarctica77 and Stubby for helping me with my stories! Updates: - Chapter 1 of Old Neighbor is finally fixed! - Massage Therapy Ch. 05 Preview is up on Patreon! - The Old...

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