All Comments on 'Master PC - Responsibility Ch. 02'

This might be the most interesting take I've seen on the MPC format so far. Great work, keep it up :)

Love it. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Outstanding, cant wait for the next part. I used to love this universe when it first came out but so many bad writers have ruined it for me over the years. Thanks for bringing the joy back for me.

Really interesting take on an old trope, excited to follow this story.

I'm liking where you are going with the MPC series. Already shaping up to be a good take on it.

Great new direction for a fav genre! Looking forward to many more chapters. Thank you.

So cool ! Love it! Please little more skinny) little more another reality)

I do like the fact that he's trying to help people as he does this and not just control them.

Good but you need to work on the sex scenes. Reading a single sentence to imagine a sex scene isn't what I like. The problem with the mind control / body modification stories is that they focus entirely on the changes and leave everything else aside. I just hope you won't go there.

Wasn't too sure about this. A Quaranteam fan who kind of drifted here while waiting for a new chapter. I love it!!

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I like the direction the plot is taking. Having "good guy" in charging thehysical and mental characteristics of others is fraught with the possibility of slipping into a rather trite portrayal of a toxic dictatorship with a large measure of abuse. While I don't expect this to happen in OtterlyMindblowing's work, it is a fine line that is being tread here. (I'm assuming OM is male based on the style of writing, but i am not 100% sure...).

Fun times. I assume the program isn't protected really, which might cause some interesting mayhem.