All Comments on 'Master's Plaything - The Device'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
My pet?

Buy a dog. Then get a decent plot line. This was totally lacking in any type of originality or cleverness. UGH!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Not

possible, no one could hold off that long.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Great story

I thought the story was great.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
sleepy

That could have been soooo much better and less wordy reading it i kept falling asleep so not a gud sign for something thats ment to turn me on!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

That turned me on

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