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transientartstransientartsalmost 3 years ago

Something that definitely tickles the fancy, if you're into it that is. A short, to the point story sure to light your fire. Thanks for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Not bad my guy, but maybe work on your dialogue? Doesn't exactly sound organic

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Hey it's Max. I hope you enjoy my stories. Constructive criticism is welcomed. You can find me at MaximillionVentres@DirtySquiggler on twitter. I just submitted The Roommate 03. I am about to start The Roommate 4 shortly. Keep you eyes open, Max

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