All Comments on 'May the Best Lover Win'

I liked this, and the development of the characters

I wasn’t sure about the structure; sounded like it would too hard to successfully create as erotica. However the author definitely delivered on the promise. The characters’ evolution was an added bonus.

Very well done! I liked the juxtaposed storyline delineating their personal perspective of how events unfolded; emotions, positions, attraction etc. 5*

O.k., my dick is hard.

Different. I liked it.

This was an energetic, fun read! Great dialogue, descriptions, and pacing throughout.

BKS678…. I can’t figure out if ur m or f ? Either way, MY GOD! I was reading one of my favorite mysteries when I said time for some me time… reading some erotic adventures… TO MY SURPRISE… this had to be one of the best stories to date! Well written, enjoyable hot hot hot 🥵

But… what a great read! U R Awesome! M/F whoever u are… where would u like the ring, house keys and the new car??? Outstanding is the best I can say! Really Really want to explore UR mind!

Finally… WOW 😮🫨😊🤔💗

Thanks BBB. In the context of this particular literary challenge, you not knowing my gender is a worthy compliment.