All Comments on 'Me & My Sister'

Shouldn't it be...My Sister and I?

Please read many other well written works before you submit another episode. It seems you have a good idea, but appear to have weak writing skills.

Very disappointing offering that, with help, would be a fantastic start.

Proof Read, or source a Proof Reader .

Find an Editor.

Yout potential is shown, fine tuning will help.

Thanx for the comments i will took your advice more seriously