All Comments on 'Mediterranean Island Holiday'

Wrong category. Wasted effort for a first-time story. It's been done a thousand times before. Nothing new or exciting, move along.

The B E S T ! ...Erotic writing to land on Literotica in a long long time !!

The whole set up of this story taking place on a exotic Island, was a beautiful Touch, adding small vivid details here and there, all played out and painted with erotic words, along with just the right timing, to tease and tickle our Minds leaving me wanting more. I take my hate off to You, with respect, for taking your Talent and your time to build your short but amazing story like this, with real characters to fall for, like B and J... to play out into our very own Imagination. I Thank You for sharing your work of ART, and it is my hope You will continue where you left off, for giving us a small taste/ a sample of your creative Mind, is Not enough feed the lustful animal inside of Us!

Yours truly ... a hungry Fan, left behind on your Island

I know ...I am wasting my Time, responding to a Anonymous AI / Zombie comment here, referring to this Story as being in the wrong Category. But what’s troubling here is the growing trend and the 180 degree shift in mankind’s behaviour, man being the man and the woman being a women ( not some Lab GMO Human Species ) both should be proud of what nature has gifted as a unique partnership in complementing one another ... is fading away at a great Loss in simply Living being and Loving , acting on our universal instincts, using all his or her senses in expressing what a Gentleman or a Lady can bring to the relationship , in creating, sharing and displaying their real feelings, emotions and what they really think and feel from inside, and stop hiding behind government forced brainwashing trends, having invented for us new titles and role models of role playing out (their) politically correct Agenda’s ... Programming our Values, Societies and separating us by the oldest trick in the book, divide and concur, through their Double Speak self Interest intentions , robbing us of our basic thinking for ourselves

Our Minds and herding us like cattle and sheep like they own us.

My Point and Question to anyone reading this ... can AI, Zombies and Androids replace and understand real Human feelings of LOVE, ROMANCE and appreciate A Human. Erotic Mind that goes deeper and naughtier then the touch of Flesh it’s self .

Yours Truly - a Mind stuck on your exotic Island

Wrong category.

Hey guys, thanks for feedback. Apologies I am not sure what is being referred to as “wrong category”

All feedback welcome and thanks also for the encouragement