All Comments on 'Meeting a Newly Divorced Mom Pt. 02'

Great story! Can't wait fir the next chapter. I hope Rick and Tonya become a couple!!!

Very good story keep it going can't wait to see how Tanya opens up and with Bella also in the picture.

This story is smokin hot. Good descriptive writing. Hope he finishes deep inside both in the next chapter. 5 stars.

You are a good writer. Most extended sex scenes are boring, they just rehash the mechanics and dont really fire up the libido. But your writing is exceptional in that instance, with good use of dialogue. Curious, how much is fact and how much is fiction?

Love this

I love your story, and your hot, sexy writing. Very good and very arousing. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I might suggest having someone else read and edit your work, however, to catch some things that distract or are jarring for the reader, such as (1) moving in and out of present and past tense, such as: "I kissed (that's past tense) ... then bite...." (that's present tense) -- keep it all present tense or all past tense, not moving back and forth; (2) mixing up "him" when it should be a reference to "her"; (3) and double negative's that make me stop reading to figure out what you are trying to say: "...couldn't resist NOT admiring them both." (that means you couldn't admire them both, but if you drop the word "not", it would correctly read that you "...couldn't resist admiring them both." Oh, spelling too. (4) It's foreplay, not "four play."

If you can fix those small, irritating and distracting things, your stories will be even better!

thanks foro comments.. some mixed real and fantasy thoughts

Great stuff! Well written and a very hot story line. I love Bella, she's so uninhibited. Can't wait for more!

Absolutely one of the best and one of my favorite story series on this platform. Very erotic. Made my dick hard. I love the dynamic of the mother and daughter, fucking the same man, yet not having any contact. 5 stars. Reading on

Great story... I've stayed in that Hotel.... Didn't know that was going on upstairs! lol