All Comments on 'Meeting Mackenzie'

Magnificent. So hot. Hope it continues.

OMG! You may be a professional liar, but you are one great erotica writer. I loved this. I hope you do a sequel. I'm curious to discover what daddy and daughter have found!!! 5 Stars!

Was getting reallllly interesting, akin to a situation personally encountered before!

But then it turned into a ball of squat. I mean, ass to mouth? big question there. Sometimes erotica is not just that simple, but for a first timer all was well, almost spell bounding until the squat, or is that, what, no one could guess, I guess.

Unless there is a 2nd chapter that involves the daughter this shouldn't be in incest.

Continue.

Awaiting a sequel

Not incest yet. Getting there

Hot, can’t wait for more. My only question why would she say Papi if she’s Indian?

next chapter please!!

Incredibly hot story.

You had a five star story going right up until Mack took Rick's cock out of her ass and stuck it into her mouth. Disgusting and disturbing as hell. You went from 5 down to 1 with a snap of my fingers.

I also can't believe that Daddy is so blind to the fact that Jennifer and Mack are in love with each other. 1/5

Your spelling leaves something to be desired!

Example - "copy write laws" - copyright laws!